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I was going to school
With my hand on my mom’s
When I saw an old man
Asking a lady for alms.
I took out a quarter
And started to approach him.
My mom pulled me away
And said, “What are you doing?”
“You can save that up,
To buy a lot of toys.
You’ll have a lot of fun
Playing with the other boys.”
I looked up at her
And did what I was told.
The day was extremely hot
But inside, I felt cold.
Now thinking about this,
I wonder what the world’s become.
Come from your own mom.
I wonder what it will be like
To live in a perfect place.
Sharing found everywhere,
A smile seen on every face.
I want to speak to all the people
To tell them what is happening.
I may be just a little kid,
But I know what I am seeing.
This world needs compassion,
This world needs care.
Some people are scared to try
To them I say, “Dare!”
I see a dirty and polluted world
Of war and hatred here and there.
Where greed and badness lurks about
And people hardly ever share.
I see a place of suffering
Where people die of hunger.
A place that’s full of misery
Where pain and hurt linger.
This world is veiled by darkness
But there might be a cure.
If people learn about giving
We'll see a better future.
I believe it is very possible
To make this world a better place
We just have to work together
And fill our lives with love and grace.
please comment. tell me what you think.
7 comments:
nice. you should really make a copy of every poem you wrote. bind them all together and give em to me. anyway, looking forward to your next post.
hi:D
i'm not the original 'anonymous' girl..i'm her friend..hehe:D
anyway, nice job. i like it. :D
i'm the one who used to play hangman with you and anonymousI... ;D
anonymousI--
we'll just see if i can remember. ;P
anonymousII--
welcome to my blog! :D hehe
aww.. you're no fun.
*pouting and sulking*
hahaha well, i think i'll be able to remember 'em this summer.. we'll see.. :D
W-O-W.
I hate how you write oh-so-nice poems. :)
-Princess
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